Sanity   United States. May 20 2013 06:59. Posts 1076
Gumster   Sweden. May 20 2013 08:19. Posts 2279
i listened to some songs and you're not really rapping, its more like rhyming speech. you need to learn the lyrics better and talk clearer (and above all with more enthusiasm...). your bars are so different in length which makes it hard for you to rap. start by doing each line the same in length/syllables. and your mic is awful which makes the sounds so..... meh.. gl lol
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Arirang   Canada. May 20 2013 08:46. Posts 1673
oh my god
SpasticInk   Sweden. May 20 2013 10:19. Posts 6295
Listened a bit and you should work a bit on the vocals, they are a bit "low" compared to the rest.
julep   Australia. May 20 2013 10:41. Posts 1274
you have done 0 vocal editing.
plus it sounds like you are reading
Eluflop   Estonia. May 20 2013 13:10. Posts 3835
alby has got to be the whitest rap name. perhaps go more Gangsta ? it feels kind of lika a poetry reading.
SpasticInk   Sweden. May 20 2013 17:08. Posts 6295