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Maz Canada. May 20 2013 04:57. Posts 345 | | | |
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Sanity United States. May 20 2013 06:59. Posts 1076 | | | |
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Gumster Sweden. May 20 2013 08:19. Posts 2290 | | |
i listened to some songs and you're not really rapping, its more like rhyming speech. you need to learn the lyrics better and talk clearer (and above all with more enthusiasm...). your bars are so different in length which makes it hard for you to rap. start by doing each line the same in length/syllables. and your mic is awful which makes the sounds so..... meh.. gl lol |
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Arirang Canada. May 20 2013 08:46. Posts 1673 | | | |
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Good luck!
Listened a bit and you should work a bit on the vocals, they are a bit "low" compared to the rest. |
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julep Australia. May 20 2013 10:41. Posts 1274 | | |
you have done 0 vocal editing.
plus it sounds like you are reading |
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Eluflop Estonia. May 20 2013 13:10. Posts 3835 | | |
alby has got to be the whitest rap name. perhaps go more Gangsta ? it feels kind of lika a poetry reading. |
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Maz Canada. May 20 2013 17:14. Posts 345 | | |
| | On May 20 2013 09:41 julep wrote:
you have done 0 vocal editing.
plus it sounds like you are reading |
Where can I learn vocal editing Do you know it? |
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SPEWTARD Peru. May 20 2013 18:00. Posts 4306 | | | |
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dogmeat Czech Republic. May 21 2013 04:13. Posts 6374 | | |
i m a huge fan of vancouver hiphop myself
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Maz Canada. May 23 2013 06:01. Posts 345 | | |
thanks bro.. im going big watch out cuz ima blow all these other rappers out the water! |
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aernout Netherlands. May 23 2013 13:05. Posts 161 | | | |
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aernout Netherlands. May 24 2013 09:17. Posts 161 | | |
I especially like the song fire from within, it has very good bass. |
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julep Australia. May 25 2013 14:33. Posts 1274 | | |
| | On May 20 2013 16:14 Maz wrote:
Show nested quote +
On May 20 2013 09:41 julep wrote:
you have done 0 vocal editing.
plus it sounds like you are reading |
Where can I learn vocal editing Do you know it?
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depending on what daw you are using you should be Able to find tutorials on youtube |
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bigredhoss Cook Islands. May 25 2013 23:17. Posts 8648 | | |
at first i read title as "started fapping" -.- |
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