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Come on, the whole internet is waiting to see your rehearsal attempt :O

personally, i hate presentations that are filled with lot of text in powerpoint, they tend to be very long and boring.

Try to simplify every slide to just a few words or keypoints of what you are or going to be talking in a specifc theme. For example

"At the beginning of this semester I knew it was time to get involved with the change we’d all like to see in the world: Less suffering. More smiling faces. We also know that our time in College is not only for classroom learning, but for gaining the experience we need to turn our knowledge into skills. Because of this I was immediately hooked when McKenzie told me about Nourish International."

Dont paste all that in a slide. Maybe just a slide with the following points

"Nourish International" in the top center, then

- Change in the World: Less suffering. More smiles
- Gaining experinece.
-Knowledge into skills.


And with your speech you fill the gaps, or explaing what are those points, no need to explain them with text in the slides. With more text you tend to read more the slides, and look less profesional. Just talk natural and let the slides be kind of remainders of keypoints of the presentation.

wut?
each slide is going to have like two words and a picture, "Our Mission", "Ventures", etc

On February 05 2012 14:45 LemOn[5thF] wrote: Come on, the whole internet is waiting to see your rehearsal attempt :O

sry brah brah, I'm tweaking the intro. I'm starting to get it pretty decent with the fluidity. No promises on when I'll post it but soon soon soon

On February 05 2012 15:30 Night2o1 wrote: wut? each slide is going to have like two words and a picture, "Our Mission", "Ventures", etc

oh sorry, didnt read well that part hahah, well you have the point

ok so I put this together

it is wayyyyyy fuckin hard to write and master a speech in one day -_- I made quite a few errors on this take but I practiced powering through them....

going to practice as much as I can tomorrow but yah, this is still the general idea

feedback welcome..


I started the speech from the point where our President has introduced herself and welcomed everyone, and introduced me



thanks for taking the time to check it out guys.

in other news I'm rather pleased that I got a 92% on my first test in my accounting "weed-out" course

ok I'm actually listening to myself, here's what I am noticing

-wish I could weave a story into this -- feels like that got lost with all of the information I ended up trying to pack in

-I'm going to practice as much as reasonably possible in the next 40 hours until I figure out a way to where it comes out in a more natural pace.

-and so I don't get confused on the ventures part

-definitely not say 'work that table' as a brainfart

ballin'

die howard with a vengence

In honor of LP, in the middle of your speech, try to throw in a die howard without anyone noticing

I love USF, the nicest school people wise in my experience in Florida. GL there you have Mon's Venus and the Hard Rock Cafe!

On February 06 2012 14:25 mnj wrote: I love USF, the nicest school people wise in my experience in Florida. GL there you have Mon's Venus and the Hard Rock Cafe!

yah people seem pretty cool overall^^

you still around these parts?