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T8Suited Canada. Nov 30 2007 17:03. Posts 1276 | | |
For my girlfriend
We have been together for almost 4 years
I think girls will like it
Lyrics are no where close to complete
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PplusAD Germany. Nov 30 2007 17:28. Posts 7180 | | |
Dont get me wrong , you have skills and u deserve respect for that 100% 
but the song itself is a bit boring.
when u make a song you should always have a story with it.
and i miss the "happy" parts of the story that show how happy you were together in special momments.
As it its now it
sounds a bit like a 0815 love song to me.
dont know if u get what i am trying to say
i am a bit drunk ^^
But i think there were momments in your relationship that were special and unique
And i miss those special moments in the song.
PS : well , sry if i am wrong maybe i am just a bit too drunk |
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T8Suited Canada. Nov 30 2007 17:35. Posts 1276 | | |
| | On November 30 2007 16:28 PplusAD wrote:
Dont get me wrong , you have skills and u deserve respect for that 100%
but the song itself is a bit boring.
when u make a song you should always have a story with it.
and i miss the "happy" parts of the story that show how happy you were together in special momments.
As it its now it
sounds a bit like a 0815 love song to me.
dont know if u get what i am trying to say
i am a bit drunk ^^
But i think there were momments in your relationship that were special and unique
And i miss those moments in the song. |
I don't disagree. This is just the harmony though. The eventual melody line should be more dramatic and should compliment nicely with this harmony. |
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lol...
that was deep...
You have some talent dude...
The song is good, but it doesn't do anything new...it's basically a beautiful formulated song...and there is nothing wrong with that, but in my opinion you could probably be doing something a lot more creative then mimicking the usual love song cliché type of songs...
but having said that - the song is very beautiful and nicely written...and extremely well played - how long have you been playing? |
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Loco Canada. Nov 30 2007 17:54. Posts 21004 | | | |
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T8Suited Canada. Nov 30 2007 18:48. Posts 1276 | | |
| | On November 30 2007 16:43 Hjorturkall wrote:
lol...
that was deep...
You have some talent dude...
The song is good, but it doesn't do anything new...it's basically a beautiful formulated song...and there is nothing wrong with that, but in my opinion you could probably be doing something a lot more creative then mimicking the usual love song cliché type of songs...
but having said that - the song is very beautiful and nicely written...and extremely well played - how long have you been playing? |
Thanks all for the comments I've been playing for 20 years since I was 6. Song-writing however is relative new to me -- This is like my 5th composition overall, over the last 3 years.
Yea this song is kind of plain -- if I have more time I would probably have put in some variation when I repeat everything the 2nd time...... |
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BigRed0000  United States. Nov 30 2007 18:50. Posts 3554 | | |
reallly liked it. You got some mad skills. |
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